HUMBLE OR HARDEN

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HUMBLE OR HARDEN

Postby turtle » Tue Aug 04, 2009 9:49 pm

finish it, rewrite it, take it apart, put it together or blow it up :D

feel free and take a shot at adding to it or rewriting it online in the thread below

HARDEN OR HUMBLE

I saw you put down the word
You tell me you know what it says
No point in going over it again
If things aren't going to change
...

Ch:
It happens in the trial
In the middle of the storm
In the morning after
When you question your Lord
There'll be a choice to make
Never an easy thing
Will you turn your back?
Or take God's hand?
Will you humble or harden?
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Re: HUMBLE OR HARDEN

Postby WJ Autry » Wed Aug 05, 2009 12:37 am

How ya been my frozen amphibious friend!! Try saying that 5 times fast!! But, it's summer now. Anyways, to me that lyric is kinda hard for me, cuz when I start to point a finger at someone I have to curve it around so that it points back at me. So, I made a start on something similar, not the same, used some of your stuff...... Title change too.

The Person I Was
v1
I know you put down the word
don't brush it off I know what I heard
mister big shot with all your plans
tell me now where do you stand

One of us has got to go
You've done nothing but increase the load
the only thing I have left to do
I gotta get rid of you

Maybe Pre ch here?????

ch
Your messin up my trials
main cause of all my storms
It's gonna be different without you
Cause now I love the Lord
You'll only get me off track
don't want to live a lie
I have grown tired of looking back
It's time to say goodbye
to the person I was

finish it, rewrite it, take it apart, put it together or blow it up :D :shock: :?
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Re: HUMBLE OR HARDEN

Postby turtle » Wed Aug 05, 2009 5:41 am

cool! :D
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Re: HUMBLE OR HARDEN

Postby Fred Lemasters » Thu Aug 06, 2009 4:53 pm

here`s a little add on

The Person I Was
v1
I know you put down the word
don't brush it off I know what I heard
mister big shot with all your plans
tell me now where do you stand

One of us has got to go
You've done nothing but increase the load
the only thing I have left to do
I gotta get rid of you

Maybe Pre ch here?????

ch
Your messin up my trials
main cause of all my storms
It's gonna be different without you
Cause now I love the Lord
You'll only get me off track
don't want to live a lie
I have grown tired of looking back
It's time to say goodbye
to the person I was

verse 2

always looking over my shoulder
telling me whats wrong is wright.
God say`s put you behind me
so my friend your up for a fight.

My life is going in a new direction
I now only walk in the light.
the path that you have led me down
is no longer with in my site.

Just a thought
God Bless
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Re: HUMBLE OR HARDEN

Postby turtle » Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:37 pm

way to work it guys :D

fun stuff ;)
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Re: HUMBLE OR HARDEN

Postby WJ Autry » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:36 pm

Wait Fred, my brother, either your rhyme scheme is off or mine is, so one of us has to fix it. LOL!
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Re: HUMBLE OR HARDEN

Postby smiles2322 » Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:02 am

Very nice so far :)
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Re: HUMBLE OR HARDEN

Postby turtle » Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:37 pm

thanks 8)

it's very cooperative

then we blow it up! HAHAH :twisted:
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Re: HUMBLE OR HARDEN

Postby davebyers » Tue Jun 29, 2010 9:31 am

I'm guessing this is a real situation your dealing with eh? Nothing like to start the songwriting mode eh?

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