ring a ding ding it's a Christmas verse

[turtle]

Boyah! It's Christmassy and stuff

I like this verse but I haven't been able to complete the lyric

add to it if you can but try and keep the verse as is, but if not, that's alright too, 'cause I'm cool like that, very laid back about messin' up a dah lyric thing, go nuts

who loves yah baby? yeah that's right, I do... and Jesus and Kojak

now back to your regularly scheduled verse

Santa rings a good will bell
While neon tells of holiday sales
The traffic plays rhythm for
Children singing Christmas carols
The city's wrapped in red and green
Tied with ribbons of road
The wisemen watch a nativity scene
Beneath the falling snow

[Tom Solanto]

Chorus
You can tell it’s Christmas time
Something’s not quite right
In the darkness of this evening
We are missing the light
Where is Jesus
Where is Jesus…
Where is Jesus
As the snow falls
And children sing
Something is missing
What’s wrong with this
Where is Jesus

[smiles2322]

Hey Blair and Tom,

Wow this is really powerful stuff! Great job guys! Keep it going

Tammy

[turtle]

cool

[northwoods]

. . . for what it's worth, here it is . . .
(for some reason I kept coming back to an 8-beat line)

Fake Santas ring those goodwill bells
While signs flash out their Yuletide sales
The swishing beat of traffic gells
With children singing Christmas carols

As snowy streets blink red and green
Tied with wet ribbons of concrete
Three plastic wise men stand serene
Keeping the manger scene complete

Have a great 2010, eh?

[Tom Solanto]

Some cool images here.. Me likes.. nice man