THE WEDDING

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THE WEDDING

Postby ter098mel » Sat Jan 03, 2009 3:33 pm

I wrote this back in 88-90', I've also put it on CD with music in my home studio.

THE WEDDING

An invitation came today,
to a wedding, by The Way,
Christ said bring some oil, I have the wine,
and don't be late, be on time.

I am your first love, I am the last,
I am your future, the old is past,
You're going to make a brand new start,
Now that I have my place in your heart.
(chorous)
He said I've called you, now I come for you my bride,
I love you and my arms are open wide,
No man can love the way I do, this you've found,
So don't delay, put on your wedding gown.
(verse 3)
Christ said,
I am your husbandman divine,
I'll never leave you through all time,
I am Lord of heaven and earth,
The one who washed away your hurt.
(chorous x 2)


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Last edited by ter098mel on Fri Apr 09, 2010 3:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby Tom Solanto » Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:53 am

This is nice, thanks for sharing
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Re: THE WEDDING

Postby basumarpo1610 » Thu Apr 08, 2010 7:02 am

nice share...





i love ur post.....




thnx man... :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Re: THE WEDDING

Postby ter098mel » Fri Apr 09, 2010 4:03 pm

Hi Guys,
Haven't been here for a while. I edited "The Wedding" recently and the changes are here now. There were two lines which could have been vague to some folks, even newborn christians. Thanks for your input.

Terry
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Re: THE WEDDING

Postby clairefeistner » Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:54 am

I like it ... Allot
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Re: THE WEDDING

Postby herbaldea » Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:45 pm

How pretty!
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