Broken Formely return of the lamb

[old dude]

This is a rough copy. I hope to add the drums on sunday.
All comments appreciated!

Thanks

Todd

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7647121

Broken

Todd G. Strachan 2009

V1
Shadow and light, day and night,
fighting it out in my soul.
Weak and strong, right and wrong,
please give me the strength to carry on.

Chorus
I can't be whole until I'm broken.
Then I'll see and hear with new eyes and ears.
And I'll stay vigilant, and focused.
For the return of the Lamb is near!

V2
I pray, and I cry out, You hear I have no doubt!
Don't leave me in the midst of these flames.
Saint and sinner, the loser is the winner,
Why do I refuse to be tamed?

Chorus

V3
Pride and humility, hate and civility,
often walking hand and hand.
Destroyed and whole, forgiveness is the goal.
Remember its all a part of the plan.

Chorus

The return of the Lamb is near! 3Xs

[Tom Solanto]

Todd, man your music is really getting good bro!!!

Sounds like Neil Young when he did some of his own early stuff..

Your intro sounds like ... Old man take a look at my life, I'm a lot like you.. Forget the name.. could be ... Old man.. Not sure..

really like this a lot.. I almost wanted to hear you sing Falsetto ... u

No nits''' Only listening on my laptop as I prepare for work.. Not a good judge of music quality that way.. I will listen later when I get home though a good system and give you some feedback on the music..

Great work bro....

[old dude]

Thanks Tom, I need to fix the bass, maybe try to clean up the sound of the bass as well.
Thanks for the listen, let me know what you think. I took my stereo outside for my sons grad party so
I'm only listening through headphones, and they are not always accurate. Neil Youngs sound fits me, not alot of polish,
it is what it is!

Todd